Outline of Comparison of Two Ads
Topic sentence: The two ads are both travel ads. The two ads have many differences.
Main Point: The two ads differ in their styles of buildings.
Supporting details:
Description
The roofs of two buildings are different in their styles; the Japanese castle is similar to
Chinese traditional buildings, and European castle is western style.
The whole structures of buildings greatly differ.
The composition of the castle in Japan is simpler than the one in Europe.
Main Point: The two ads differ in outdoors scenery.
Supporting details:
Description
The scenery of the left one is full of oriental cherry trees, and those trees are in full
blossom.
The scenery of the other is covered with tall coniferous trees.
Main Point: The two castles in ads are different in their functions.
Supporting details:
Description
The castle of the left ad was used for defense.
The castle of the other was purely a resort for ancient kings.
Main Point: The two ads also have similarities.
Supporting details:
Description
They are both beautiful and delicate castles
They are both attractive for tourists.
Concluding sentence: The different styles of buildings and scenery are aimed at attracting
tourists’ attention.
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